Abel's spanking blog & stories
There are some scenes I’m not sure I’ll ever get to play. But it doesn’t stop me imagining them…
Picture the girl, being led along the corridor by her partner. They’ve travelled some distance. “I’d like to introduce you to a few friends,’ he’d explained.
They stop in front of the final door. He knocks and waits. The door opens; he leads her in, clasping her wrist just a little too tightly. And before her eyes adjust to the darkness, it starts: hands cover her mouth, roughly; she’s blindfolded.
He speaks, but not to her. “Repayment of my debt, gentlemen. I shall come back later, once you have finished with her.”
An upper-class voice: firm, assertive: “You may leave us now.” The door opens again, closes behind him.
She screams for help; the slap across her face buys her stunned silence. “Gentlemen,” the voice murmurs softly: “Shall we?”
Hands. Everywhere, all at once – how many, she cannot tell. Touching, fondling, groping. She tries to fight her way out, but there are too many of them.
They strip her, tearing at buttons and cloth to bare her. And then the hands continue – probing, squeezing, penetrating.
The voice again: “Tie her down.” And she feels herself being bent forward – over the back of a sofa, she guesses. Ropes are applied to her wrists; she’s pulled forward as they are secured. More ropes on her ankles; they too are tied tight, pulling her onto tiptoe, her legs parted, leaving her shamefully exposed.
She trembles, begs for mercy, even before the voice explains, “One stroke for every ten guineas owed.” (‘Guineas’? With what? How much did he owe? Did he know what they were going to do to her?)
And then the first cut, slicing, burning, agonising. The first of more-than-she-could count: the men swapping over every minute or so, as she pays his debt.
Then nothing. No strokes, no touching, no words. Just the agonising pain across her buttocks.
Eventually, he speaks again. “Shall we leave her, gentlemen?” And the sound of the door opening, and the group leaving.
The door shuts. She’s alone. Sobbing.
And then the sound. A footstep behind her. A zip being opened, a belt buckle undone. And she realises she still has company, as he moves close behind her and she realises that the worst is still to come…
Jessica
July 11th, 2009 at 10:16 am
Wow. Hot. Hmmmmm.
I shouldn’t really read this kind of stuff at 10.15am. What am I supposed to do about it?
eliane
July 11th, 2009 at 10:18 am
Lol, I agree. Hot, and I shouldn’t read it at this time of day!
Kami Robertson
July 11th, 2009 at 11:22 am
Holy shit! Mmmmmmmmmmmmm……. Me! Me! Pick me!
Faye
July 11th, 2009 at 4:32 pm
Oh my…
Wow Abel, it’s like you’ve just climbed into my imagination or something
Haron
July 11th, 2009 at 6:55 pm
See, that’s the kind of scene I found hot about 3 years ago, and now it just makes me want to run away fast. Glad there’ll always be girls to whom it appeals – less of a responsibility on me to provide satisfaction…
Zille Defeu
July 11th, 2009 at 7:46 pm
[makes incoherent noises of arousal]
catherine
July 12th, 2009 at 11:16 am
I’m, er, with Zille and Faye on this one. That blew my mind somewhat. When can we play it?!
Pandora
July 13th, 2009 at 5:31 pm
Oh my word.
At first this didn’t do anything for me – the problem with “a group of random men” fantasies is that actually, they would have to be certain men (or certain kinds of men?) for me to enjoy it at all, which is so not the point that the fantasy loses momentum. The idea of actually random men is just squicky.
And then you had her tied down with her legs apart and whipped, and I stopped caring. I love your brain.
Pandora
July 13th, 2009 at 5:32 pm
I should add that the set-up had me hooked as well. Definitely one to add to the list of “Abel’s stories I want to film, if he’ll let me”