Abel's spanking blog & stories
Why might a girl be hiding away in a barn? I only ask because that’s at the heart of a little spanking scene that’s been playing itself out in my daydreams lately, but I can’t fathom a sensible starting point for my plot.
The spanking side of the equation is pretty clear. A girl in a big house is caught stealing food. She’s questioned, and merely complains that she was hungry. A spanking ensues – hard, but not excessive, for one can’t expect a girl to starve, much as one disapproves of theft. “Misguided”, she’d be told. “If you’re hungry, ask.”
Yet a few days later, someone (the butler?) notices the same girl stealing food once more, hiding it in her dress, and sneaking out of a back door of the house. He trails her from a distance, and spies her heading towards the outbuildings. The girl sneaks into a barn; our detective follows, quietly following her inside. There, to his surprise, he hears two voices from the hayloft – so he climbs a ladder and finds both his quarry and another lass of a similar age, who’s greedily tucking into the stolen food.
They’d be taken back to the big house, of course. The young thief would be whipped, severely, as would their uninvited guest. But where had this latter girl come from? A childhood best friend, seeking sanctuary with the one person who’d help her? Turned out by her parents? Dismissed from her post as a maid at some other country estate? In flight, having been handed over to be married against her will?
And, whilst I’m pondering the unknowns: who was the girl who was helping her? Was she really a servant, as I’d initially envisaged? Or was she maybe the daughter of the master of the house? Had she known the hideaway at all – or simply found the girl, tired and hungry, in her hiding place and taken pity on her.
Oh how I love working out the whys and wherefores of spanking scenes!
Emma Jane
September 3rd, 2010 at 10:14 am
I think the first girl is a ward of the master of the house. Maybe he took her from an orphanage or workhouse? And the second girl is her friend (cousin, sister) who has run away from the same place?
Nice idea for a scene actually. Would like to play that sometime please!
midtjyden
September 3rd, 2010 at 12:43 pm
the first girl is a ward – she lives with her uncle because her parents are…. uhhmmm stationed abroad, I think.
The second girl ran away from an orphanage nearby and first girl has sheltered her for sereval days listening to fearsome (but somehow exciting) stories about the birchings and strappings given in the strict orphanage….
Maybe the second girl ends up being adopted into the house? … a world of adventure and mischief opens to first girl as she learns from her new “sister”?….
Melanie
September 3rd, 2010 at 1:51 pm
I don’t think the first girl should be a daughter, because a daughter should not be afraid to ask her father for help. If a daughter found someone in need and wanted to care for her, she would simply have to tell her father. Also, it seems inconsistent to punish a daughter for stealing food from her own house. Given that she was told she just needed to ask, the father doesn’t seem that controlling.
I was initially inclined to go with maid, but that doesn’t seem to work either (unfortunately). How would a maid have had occasion to find the hiding girl in the first place? Also, wouldn’t people have noticed she’d been skipping out on work long before she was actually followed to the barn. Young girls aren’t exactly known for short conversations.
I think that leaves us with a ward. A ward would have the freedom to come and go more often than a maid. It wouldn’t be unthinkable for her to visit the barn just for the fun of it. Perhaps both girls were refugees? Didn’t people often send their children to live with others in safer places during WWII? If they hadn’t been there long, it would make sense for the first girl not to have figured out that the gruff man she was living with was actually kind (as evidenced by his understated reaction to her stealing food). Thus, she would have been afraid to ask for his help when her niece ran away from the cruel person with whom she had been placed.
Of course, the runaway could be a cousin or close friend, but making her a niece exponentially increases the first girl’s desire and responsibility to protect and care for her. Of course, these would both be dramatically stronger if the second girl was a little sister (which I actually prefer), but that seems inconsistent. It doesn’t make sense for the sisters to have been split if the man with whom the first is living would be willing to care for both. And of course he would take her into his care without a second thought once he finds out how the younger has been treated by her guardian, and that the guardian hasn’t even looked for her in the week she’d been missing. Though, he would obviously have to punish them both for deception and for not seeking help from those who genuinely cared for them. Just think of all the terrible things that could have happened to the younger while she was living in the barn, especially with winter approaching. And the older greatly compromised her character in choosing to steal, particularly after already having been punished for that and told she simply needed to ask whenever she wanted food.
eliane
September 3rd, 2010 at 3:52 pm
@ej Can I be girl 2? Pretty please?
Emma Jane
September 3rd, 2010 at 3:57 pm
@Eliane, definitely! Abel we want to play now!!!!
Melanie
September 4th, 2010 at 7:28 am
I had another thought–what if both girls were recently orphaned? The girls are best friends, and some tragedy took both sets of parents’ lives at the same time. A small country orphanage took in the first girl, but did not have room for the second. Since the other girl had nowhere to go, she ended up hiding out in the orphanage’s barn.
Abel
September 4th, 2010 at 11:58 am
I so love all of the thoughts. I’m almost tempted to repost this several times, each with the different characters you suggest!
And yes, this scene cries out to be played rather than written
@Melanie, particularly – welcome, and thank you for your great ideas