The Sound of Paddling

Now, who’s for some lovely new writing in the spanking genre? Abel, the tireless surfer that he is, has discovered Copper’s Quiet Triumphs, which includes a fantastically hot, mostly real-life vignette about young Copper listening to her friend getting the paddle, while she is waiting for her turn outside the principal’s office.

Here’s a little taste of her writing:

In my agitation I seem to have become possessed of superhuman senses. I can practically see Mr. H. leaning against his desk with one hand in his pocket, and C. standing in front of him, her eyes downcast in a contrition that’s entirely fictitious. I can certainly hear him talking, and he must have a master’s degree in scolding, because the words filtering through the wooden door are making me weak in the knees. I know he’s holding that blasted paddle and tapping it on his thigh as he lectures, and I almost jump when I hear his muffled voice directing her to bend over the desk.

I resist the urge to cover my backside with my hands; it’s already burning in anticipation, but I know Mrs. K. is watching me, and I’ve got to maintain that last scrap of futile teenage dignity, so I just study my shoes as I hear the swish and crack of the paddle, once, twice, three times, and then a pause for a couple of pointed questions and a gasp of, “yes, sir,” from C. before it lands again, four, five, six times.

We are instant fans.

2 thoughts on “The Sound of Paddling

  • 3 July, 2006 at 9:20 pm
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    ‘Instant’ fans? I had to read the story at least five times. Just to convince myself that I was a fan.

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  • 5 July, 2006 at 5:49 am
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    Well, this is a lot more thrilling than the story for me, since I’ve been a fan of both of you for a long time. Thank you! :)

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