Our friend Catherine has recently shared with us her favourite spanking story, “Boot Camp” by D. Mox. After only a few paragraphs, I could see why it appealed to her, and I thought that more people deserved to know about it.
Set in a Boot Camp set up for a reality TV series, the story follows the adventures of recruit Emma Castille, who has to be one of the most memorable spanking story characters I’ve ever encountered. The plot and the dialogue drew me in, and the spanking scene was electric.
Here’s a taster for you. (And I’m posting this on Saturday morning, because the story is pretty long, and impossible to stop reading, so do avoid opening it when you’ve got work to do.)
His tone was hard and disapproving when he spoke, “Recruit Castille… I’d like to know if you regret slighting my character and inferring that I am stupid!”
Castille whimpered, “Oh, you really have no idea how much, Sir.”
His big hand cracked down on her unpunished cheeks and she yelped loudly in surprise and pain.
“That is not an acceptable answer, Castille!”
She groaned out, “I’m sorry, Sir. Yes, Sir. I am lousy with regret. Completely remorseful. I apologize deeply and offer amends to you and your family.”
McCafferty choked and tried not to laugh. God, the girl could not *keep* herself from being a smartass even when she was sincere! Tag and Schell turned their heads until they stopped chuckling. McCafferty’s voice was strident with his accent, “And what were you thinking today during that pathetic display, Recruit?”
She wished to God he would get on with it and stop torturing her, “I wasn’t, Sir.”
He growled, “Exactly! And it is totally unacceptable to me that a recruit of *mine* would act without thinking!”
He brought down his hand hard on the opposite cheek. A matching pink handprint flared up as the “Crack!” of his hand against her bottom rang in the room. She yelped loudly again.
“I want you to *state* why you are being punished, Castille.”
She squirmed with humiliation, they usually didn’t make recruits talk during punishment. She took a deep breath and murmured in her most official voice, “This recruit was insubordinate, aggressive, and insulting, Sir. This recruit deserves severe punishment for her unwarranted and inappropriate actions.”
He brought his large right hand down again, curling the fingers around her cheek with a loud “Smack!” and growled, “You bet your ass you do.” Then he started spanking her seriously.
I dare every one of the readers who are likely to be spanked some times soon to use the phrase “I’m lousy with regret, Sir/Ma’am”. After you do, please come ’round here and report the consequences!
Wow…where did my morning go?!
That story is one hell of a roller coaster ride, really got my emotions flying left right and centre. I’m feeling rather stunned by it actually, think I need to go and lie down…
I’d already decided I’d use the lousy with regret comment before being dared to, sadly I have no spankings scheduled until the middle of next month…. poor me
I’ll do my best to remember it then 
Well I do have work to do… But I don’t really have any intention of doing it so I may as well use this as an excuse. God, Haron, you’re such a bad influence.
And for those of us who are highly unlikey to be spanked in the forseeable future, I dare *Haron* to use the phrase, and report back to *us*. Tis only fair.
I double dare Haron!! As Smudge says, it’s only fair.
What a lovely reward for making it through the week! Thanks, Haron, for waiting for the weekend– who knows how many appointments I would have missed had you posted that on a Wednesday.
Afraid I’ll have to join the queue of those unlikely to have the opportunity to use the classic phrase any time soon, but I SO look forward to reading the reports of others! Alas, Evie and Smudge, I suspect that Haron will have to wait for quite some time before she can surprise Abel with the brilliance of that line.
It’s the sequel – “After Boot Camp” – that’s the really good story:
http://www.erotic-spanking.com/cgi-bin/stories/display.cgi?id=6&sort=author&storyview=toc&chapter=1
(Just when you thought you had wasted enough time…)
I swear this is a plot get get me to do no work and fail my A levels!
Yes. It’s a plot. Now rise above it and do some work, Evie!
(I think the first part is the better story, so there.)
I think I’ll have to try that line tonight… of course that means I’ve got to come up with something to regret… *grin*
Oooooh Abel, and I thought you were going to resist the temptation!!! Shocking lack of self-discipline! 😉
Lol Haron despite you being the first non-teacher ever to tell me to do some work… It worked! I guess I owe you my russian history essay.
An excellent sequel by anyones standards but I’m with Haron, I think the first part is the better story…
I shall endeavour to remember that phrase and use it. Either next weekend or sooner if I get a date in beforehand. And will, of course, report back.
Would have got several uses yesterday, had I but been on line rather than… busy.
Mind, Themselves have rather short memories and keep punishing me for things they’ve already punished me for – adding new smartass comments to the list isn’t going to be helping my cause any!
Sadly I think I shall be finding myself over someone’s lap tomorrow…so shall try the ‘lousy with regret’ line and report back. Though not sure he’ll be too impressed!
Very impressed that (a) Evie does work occasionally and (b) that Haron was able to motivate her. Would have thought stronger measures were required.
Looking forward to littlenic’s and Chloe’s reports.
Both stories were excellent– never considered reading the first without the 2nd…
She sooo should have pointed out that she didn’t “infer” that he was stupid, she *implied* it. He “inferred.”
Wow. *fans self* Thankyou for posting these! I loved both: I agree that the first is the stronger story, but the second is deliciously indulgent.
I’ve emailled both links to Mr C in the hopes he’ll find them just as stimulating as I did. And that maybe they’ll give him an idea or two…
If anyone’s thinking about it would not recommend declaring oneself ‘lousy with regret’ to a Dom standing over you with a scary whip…particularly if you follow this by bursting into giggles. The consequences are somewhat painful 😉
Ooooh, Chloe, thanks for the feedback. That’s a very tempting thought… xxx
LOL I knew we could trust you to do something as brave as that, Chloe dear. Hope it was worth it!