Short story – The Punishment Cell

Many of you will be familiar with the SSC, the summer Short Story Contest at the soc.sexuality.spanking newsgroup.

Each year, entries are invited for various categories – and it’s fun to contribute. (Hey, what else is one to do on holiday?!). I posted an entry t’other day in the “Adult” category, which has a 500-word limit. I’m reproducing it below, for your kinky entertainment…

THE PUNISHMENT CELL

They’d left her alone. Here, in this room. Just her and the punishment frame, and the small pile of prison clothes that she’d removed, as instructed, and placed in a neat pile on the floor.

Watson had brought her here. The officer in charge of C wing. The officer with whom she’d argued earlier in the day. (Why had she argued? Why had she been so stupid? Why couldn’t she turn back time?). Led her, handcuffed, down the long, silent, antiseptic corridors, unlocking each of the heavy doors in turn, locking them firmly behind her. Brought the girl who’d questioned his authority to the place where it would be demonstrated to her in such unequivocal terms.

Then left, without so much as a glance.

Ten minutes ago? Thirty? Hard to keep track of time.

Too long. Not long enough.

Her eyes kept glancing to the polished wooden contraption in the centre of the high, bare cell. Glancing, looking away, steeling herself, glancing back. The leather ties that would bind her ankles. Looking away. Looking away. The smooth, dark wood over which they’d have her bend, the ties for her wrists on the opposite side. Looking away. Looking away.

She shivered and wrapped her arms around herself. It was cold. So cold, sitting here, naked, on this solitary plastic chair. A single bulb hung above her, the only frail source of light or warmth in this lonely place.

She’d been caned on admission, as the magistrate had instructed to her shock and to cries of disbelief from her family and friends crowded into the tiny courtroom. Twenty strokes as she touched her toes in the prison’s reception room, between stripping from her own clothes and covering herself with the rough, ugly, government-issue uniform. Each stroke unbearable, for its pain and its shame, each marking her transition, her loss of freedom.

But today was different. No cane here. No mere admissions officer. Any moment now: the prison Punishment Officer, bearing a birch. The birch, of which the girls whispered so reverentially. (Apart, that is, from those who’d received it: they fell silent, looked away, tried not to remember. Tonight, she’d become one of them).

They would flog her until they were confident that she would co-operate fully for the remainder of her sentence, they’d said. Until she understood that girls did not challenge officers. Until she was suitably punished.

Waiting, glancing, waiting.

Crying, softly. Wiping away the tears with the back of her hand.

Waiting, waiting.

And then, in the distance, the sound of a metal door opening and closing, and the clatter of boots on stone growing ever-closer…

7 thoughts on “Short story – The Punishment Cell

  • 5 August, 2008 at 10:19 am
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    *shivers* When are you going to arrange that reformatory weekend, then?

    Delicious. Definitely one for the next book :)

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  • 5 August, 2008 at 11:58 am
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    *Shudder* You and Haron do this thing while writing that makes the scene play out in my mind while I’m reading your stories. I can just see the room, and the girl, feel her fear…

    I love it! Great story.

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  • 5 August, 2008 at 5:22 pm
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    That was a fabulous story. I know what Kate means about experiencing the story… just great!

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  • 6 August, 2008 at 7:17 am
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    Wow – brilliant writing. I feel all shivery just reading it… (and I’m definitely going to be playing it… well, once my storeroom is cleaned out and can fulfil its true purpose as a room of imprisonment ;-))

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  • 6 August, 2008 at 12:44 pm
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    Whoa. I feel all shivery too. I’m scared!

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  • 6 August, 2008 at 2:18 pm
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    Awwww, it’s so lovely when so many of our favourite commenters say such nice things :-)

    Thank you all for the kind comments.

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  • 6 August, 2008 at 2:22 pm
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    Oh yes… very shivery! I’m with everyone above, experiencing the story like it’s happening here and now…and I’m scared too! I like it! :)

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