This next piece stands out in this year’s collection of my favourite posts by other writers, as it’s an excbange between two authors. As Olivia Crowe explained, she and her boyfriend had been apart for two weeks; she shared some of their texts.
She wrote to him,..
New fantasy: slave girl, bought by you, [the] master of the house. She’s a good girl, works hard, tries her best not to get into trouble – sometimes fails, but never too much to be punished hard. Then, the time comes when her master wants to take her sexually – saying she has spent enough time in his house to give herself to him completely. She protests, fights, says she is a virgin. Furious that she would refuse him, he beats her. Hard. And then fucks her. Hard.
And she’s such a sweet girl, she so badly wants to please you…and she even liked it a bit when you fucked her. But being fucked and beaten so hard made her tired – she completely sleeps through breakfast the next day. Violently woken, pulled out of bed, told off for her laziness. Spanked again, the hairbrush on an already sore bottom…
And he wrote back:
The slave girl, after being beaten again in the morning for failing to provide her master with breakfast, is told to go clean up the garden of her master’s house. While he enjoys the sun on a bench overlooking the flower area and the central large oak tree, the slave girl uses a pair of gardening scissors to trim the flower beds. Bent over in her white gown, the master admires the view of his handiwork from earlier.
He calmly walks over to the young girl and gives her a firm slap on her bruised butt. The girl yelps and loses her balance, crushing dozens of flowers in her fall. Her master tells her to get up, and look at the mess she made. She pleads “but sir, you…” – but the master won’t hear any of it…He grabs her by the hair and pulls her to the center of the garden. The girl protests but the master tears her clothes off her frail body, and makes the now naked slave girl bend over against the tree…
I’ll leave you to read what happens next at Olivia’s own site. But it’s hot. Oh, so hot!
Hot fantasy … except perhaps for the “young lady” at the very end that sort of takes me out of it. Now, how do I get my boyfriend to play such a writing game next time he’s out of town?
“Young lady” is very much a state of mind, not an age-related thing, surely?!
Very much so, it was just not the state of mind I imagined the girl in the story to occupy. I understand that slavery is a very open concept in a kinky context, often nothing more than a metaphor for submission, but when it is used it feels odd to see the “slave” addressed as “young lady”. That impression does not take anything away from the hotness of the fantasy as such nor from the fact that I very much like the idea of playing such a writing game with your boyfriend.
Oh wow…I didn’t expect to be included in this year’s “best of the kinky rest”. And this honestly wasn’t that well written, we just hadn’t seen each other for too long and we were horny…thank you Abel. I’m blushing xx