Abel’s story in memory of Alex Birch

The results of the annual Summer Story Contest on the soc.sexuality.spanking newsgroup were announced yesterday. Abel’s short story “The Classroom” has taken the first place in the category “Remembering Alex Birch”.

It’s a bitter-sweet victory, I’m sure. We still miss Alex, who passed away earlier this year. He had always supported the SSC, both by organising it and by entering many stories every year; it’s only fitting that this year’s contest was held in his memory, with a separate category for stories that commemorated him in some way.

Below is Abel’s winning entry.

The Classroom.

It had hurt – horribly, each of the six carefully-executed strokes quite simply agonising. Her classmates had watched in silence: wincing as he’d punished her, watching the neat red lines tracing their lesson across her pale skin whilst she’d stretched, tight, over his desk.

She’d walked – ashamed, hurting – to the back of the classroom, pausing to summon up the courage to lower her bottom onto the hard wooden chair. She so wanted to cry, but knew that her tears must be kept for later, in private – after she’d presented the punishment slip to her doubtless-disapproving housemaster, to be added to her school record.

Millie, next to her, squeezed her hand. Other girls flicked supportive glances her way, silently mouthing their are-you-OKs. A note passed surreptitiously from desk to desk – Erin, her best friend, seated at the front of the class, offering her condolences and her love: “My darling Poppy. That looked awful. He was a right bastard: you were so brave. Hugs later. You alright? xxx”

“Yeah. Fine. Not as bad as it looked. Didn’t hurt much. Old fool must be losing his touch! xxx” – a reckless reply, given the need to convey the folded paper back across the room. The master had spotted the reply winging its ill-fated way almost as soon as it had left the punished girl’s grasp; he’d monitored its progress, choosing his moment to pounce.

He unfolded the missive; read the correspondence slowly to himself, shook his head as if in sorrow – and beckoned Erin to stand.

“I simply won’t tolerate that sort of comment.”

“Sorry, sir.” Meaning it, her whispered apology tinged with dread.

He turned, picked up the cane. “I think you know the procedure…”

“Please…?” But he merely rapped the desk with the rattan and waited. She stepped forward, paused, looked at him in the vain hope of a last-minute reprieve – and then lowered her knickers, lifted her skirt and leant forward.

Poppy averted her eyes as her friend was punished. Punished! For the very act of friendship. She bit her lip, counting the six, knowing how Erin – far less used to the taste of the rod – must be suffering. And then her friend was being dismissed, the master’s hastily-scribbled report of her strokes clutched in her trembling hands, and he could turn his attention to unfinished business.

“Poppy Reynolds.”

“Sir…?” He couldn’t… He wouldn’t…

“Stand when I’m talking to you, young lady!”

“Yes, sir.” She rose to her feet, heart pounding at the realisation that standing was merely a prelude to another long, lonely march to the front of the classroom.

“You’ve just seen what happens to pupils who insult me. And this time, I shall make sure it hurts. Come out here and bend over, and we’ll see whether the old fool can get his touch back…”

 

P.S. Recently, when we looked back at the start of our blog, we saw that the very first comment we got was from Alex.

6 thoughts on “Abel’s story in memory of Alex Birch

  • 13 December, 2010 at 4:06 pm
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    Many congratulations on winning that special category of the SSC, especially given how wonderful many of the stories in it are. I was so impressed with your story and it feels right to say Alex would have been too.

    It’s still hard for me to believe he’s gone. He gave so much to his friends and communities.

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  • 16 December, 2010 at 7:18 pm
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    Well done on winning -got diverted from commenting by the lure of the poll

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  • 16 December, 2010 at 8:01 pm
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    A very sexy and extremely well written story, Abel! :-) Congratulations on winning the contest!

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  • 17 December, 2010 at 1:36 am
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    Abel, a beautiful school spanking story, honoring a truly great ‘spanking story writer, every one’s friend Alex Birch. I am sure Alex is looking down at you Abel, and proudly smiling, by saying “Give Haron, my love, and six of the best with a pliable stinging cane, on her bare bottom.” Maybe one day an award will be named in Alex Birch’s name. Given yearly in his honor.

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  • 28 January, 2011 at 6:43 pm
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    While I’m sure that second caning hurt terribly for poor Poppy. I can’t help but have a huge smile on my face. Such a great short. Congrats on the win!

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  • 28 January, 2011 at 6:59 pm
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    Thanks, all, for the kind comments.

    And Doodlebug: welcome to the site :-)

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