A young woman finds herself before the butler, knowing she is to be punished. The door to his room is locked firmly behind her.
Is she:
a) the daughter of the master of the house
or
b) a maid?
She’s here:
c) to be punished by him for the first time
or
d) with memories of past whippings fresh in her mind?
He tells her to undress:
e) nervously, she removes her garments, shy before his steady gaze
or
f) she refuses; he seizes her roughly and strips her naked?
He orders her to bend over to be whipped:
g) she does as she is told, leaning obediently over the edge of the table
or
h) she hesitates; he slaps her face and pushes her over; tying her down with rope to secure her co-operation?
He:
i) reaches for the birch that he prepared earlier that day
or
j) removes his belt?
“I’m going to…”
k) “…thrash you until you are truly sorry, young lady”
or
l) “… give you a dozen strokes. Hard.”?
She:
m) takes the punishment stoically, silently, not letting him see how he’s hurting her
or
n) sobs throughout, begging for mercy and forgiveness?
After he’s done, he moves behind her, tells her she’s a good girl and:
o) tells her to stand
or
p) touches her in the most inappropriate way…
I think I’m going to go for “a – d – f – h – i – l – m – p”. What about you?
b – d – e – g – j – k – m – o
This is really not as easy as it seems…but okay, I think I’ve made my choice.
b-c-f-h-j-k-m BUT then she breaks and it turns into n – o
…yeah, I cheated. So what?
I’m going for –
b – d – e – g – i – l – n – o
Love,
Ronnie
xx
Ooh, I’ll have to go for..
b-d-f-g-j-k-m-o.
Oooh this was fun! I chose a-d-f-g-j-k-n-o. Thank you, Abel. Now this is all I can think about. No chance of going back to bed now!
Without looking at anyone else’s answers…
a – d – f – g (I think the stripping must have subdued her; I can’t quite imagine the butler tying up the daughter of the house) – j – k – m – o
Pixie did something very similar to this recently in her interactive story post. I think your more structured version flows a bit better, though!
b-c-e-g-i-k-n-o I like this! So many different ways it could turn out, depending on a person’s mood at the time.
a,c, f,j, l, m, o
(I was naughty and skipped one, but the rules are to be bent, no? The butler probably wouldn’t slap the daughter of the house and I picture her as being far too haughty to submit to him willingly.)
This was a lot of fun! What an original idea
a-d-e-g-i-k-n-o
Such fun! Very much worth having woken up ridiculously early this morning.
What a delightful way to pass a few minutes – thank you.
My own take: a,c,e,h,i,k,n,o. However, it might be different if I drop by again – that’s the beauty of this kind of thing – as well as giving some interesting story ideas.
a,c, she only bares her bottom for him, g, j, l, m, o, except he just tells her he doesn’t expect to have to deal with her in this way again.
Here is my spanking story Abel. a,d,e,g,i,l,m.o. For me this would be a beautiful spanking scene, from the good old days of yesteryear.
a, c, f, h, I, k, m, p,